i think that the two top characters are not as well done as the rest of the drawing, also you may not want to post that close together, most people wont bother voting. but all and all i think its a creative drawing, good work.

this drawing fills the page well from left to right, giving the viewer a lot to look at, this reminds me a little or prestons works, the characters are all great, again a lot of personality shows well done!

thanks. it is good criticizes in addition seems to me amused to draw evil beings, perhaps deveria to draw to j.bush, ja, ja, ja. is joke thanked for of you criticize them that they write to me so that helps me to improve every day but

Good work on the detailing, now is the time to start practicing with some different compositions and anatomy.

Keep it up!

its pretty good but i want you to understand the difference between flow and the term 'detail'. detail is something that summarizes about a 150 things and there is no such thing as detailing. what youre drying to do is bring character into your drawing which is somethign youve effectively done.

what id like you to do is tape your drawing to a board and then angle it towards you so its on a slant. that way the characters wont appear taller than they actually are.

i want to definitely see more from you.

the commentary is really interesting I have taken it into account since I feel rewarding to take new knowledge in general and to improve my technique thanks for its time

Nice sketch! +8/9

Very Good
Top Marks

cool style! 8/8 !

They look really scary Nice drawing.

Graet idea. Great style.

Very nice

Looks unfinished - the blue pen there looks very unprofessional - I don't think you should have used it
Great concept. Some anatomy/proportions flaws - but the little ones. Overall - express the atmosphere pretty well